Hello
Classmates!
I´m
going to tell you about my winter holidays. This holiday I think to travel to
my house, Peralillo sixth region, because I haven’t seen my family a long time ago
and I miss them very much. The truth is that I have not thought about what will
I do on my vacation, but I would like to meet my friends because I have not
seen them a long time ago, I think we should have a good conversation, go to
parties and have a good time.
I think I will
travel alone, and when I get home the first thing that I'll do is sleep too
much, rest and eat delicious food. My grandmother is the best cooker in the
world, she always prepares lemon pie, lasagna, cakes and more. I would also
like visiting my uncles who live in the city, on july 20th it will
be my uncle’s birthday and the family
will celebrate it.
I think my
ideal vacation would be with my family in the south, visiting beautiful places,
I would visit Chiloé because I do not know that city and my grandparent told me
it was beautiful, I’d also like to enjoy the beautiful landscapes of Villarica
and Pucon once again, those are places that I love, but on the summer holidays,
because on winter it is very cold.
Hi!! Chiloe is very nice!!
ReplyDeleteI hope that you can know this place
see you bb
Very nice, Fernanda.
ReplyDeleteSome minor things to improve your writing and grammar
Say, " I haven’t seen my family FOR a long time ago and I miss them very much"
"The truth is that I have not thought about what I WILL do on my vacation"
When there is a wh word in the middle of a sentence, you invert the sentence after the question word.
Also say : "My grandmother is a great COOK" Cooker is where you cook, the stove.
Finally, I would like TO visit (ALWAYS THIS STRUCTURE, NOT GERUND"
TASK 3
LEXIS 3
GRAM. 3= 9pts = 7.0